Doctor Kitty

Amazing. Absolutely epic.

Snow and trees don't rhyme, so it throws off the familiarity of the tune. Other than that, decent rendition.

Welcome to the forums! Enjoy yourself and your writing, but remember, as said a bajillion times already in this thread, don't use chatspeak. Chatspeak makes the internet asplode. Welcome and ...

This was from homecoming which was actually a month or two ago...

Brilliant imagery. I love the story behind it. It didn't follow the same pattern and meter, though, with some clauses rhyming and others not. Well done.

I know some bipolar folks. Anyways, welcome, and enjoy your self. Glad you're here.

Armour! 7/10

Very cool. I'd like to trace back and find some family history if I could...

PICS OR IT NEVER HAPPENED. Kidding. Unless they're made of gold.

My grandmother made this bizarre, puke green gelatinous substance riddled with what I'll assume to be marshmellows. She called it green salad. It jiggled and slowly turned to green mushy ...

Turkey Day fails at life. Happy Thanksgiving.

Good Pivot weapons, assuming you made them. Your animations need smoothing out quite a bit, though. The random blood and characters don't make much sense, though.

Anyone else have problems with endings? i.e. You finish a series and are depressed for a few days? Wishing it would just go on forever? LOTR killed me. Harry Potter, ...

I'VE BEEN DISCOVERED! *divides by zero* OH SHI--

Read this a few months ago. Pure genius, I think. It was a little hard to follow, though I enjoyed it. I loved the way Screwtape's 'personality' and 'attitude' had ...